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Homework35 (on Wednesday)

작성자 : rac***   ·   2017-06-28

        I stared to learn about new issue today.
House chores is important for a family to spend time together.
I usually spend time at home with my family on weekends.
Since we have hectic schedual each other during the week,
we clean the house on weekends.
I mainly vacuum the house and go washing the dishes.
After our homework is done, we have dinner time.


PS. Teacher, I was supposed to use TAB, but It was scrlling.
So I directly enter into space.

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   I started to learn about the new issue today.
Household chores are important for a family to spend time together. I usually spend time at home with my family on weekends. Since we have a hectic schedule during weekdays, we clean the house on weekends.
I mainly vacuum the house and go washing the dishes.
After doing our task, we will have dinner together.

PS. Teacher, I was supposed to use TAB, but it was scrolling. So, I directly press the space-bar. 

Be mindful:

>spelling
>capitalization
>proper punctuation mark
>word choices

Hello, Rachel! Thank you for doing your homework. I do understand about your concern. It's okay! Well, take note of my corrections. I'll see you tomorrow. Have a great night!

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