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ESSAY 84

작성자 : joj***   ·   2017-06-29

The things that I want to under the sun is to make a sand castle in the beach I will like to do it with my friends. It willbe hot but if we get hot we could run to the cold water and cool our selves. It will be fun to feel hotness from the son and cool our selves inthe water. Especially with my friends. We talked about the trip that will go in 5 grade or 6 grade. We sleep with our friends there and we play there too. We think we are going to the beach because there is much to play with and mostly we go to the trip in summer or fall.

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           The things that I want to do under the sun is to make a sand castle in the beach and I like to do it with my friends. It will be hot but if we feel hot we could run to the cold water and cool ourselves. It would be fun to feel the hotness of the sun and cool ourselves in the water. We talked about the trip that we are going to have in 5th grade or 6th grade. We will sleep with our friends there and we will play there too. We think we are going to the beach because there is so much things to do there.Mostly we go to the trip in summer or fall.


Things to remember:

1.Preposition

2. Conjunction

3. Ordinal numbers

4.Sentence composition

     

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