This is my one more thing for speech contest

Last vacation,I went to safari. Unbelievably, Isaw a living cassowary at the
entrance!Atthe kangaroo zone, I was kicked by a kangaroo! It really hurt. Itwas agreat time to visit my aunt. I want to visit her again.

Last weekend I wentto lotte outlet with my friends.............(delete).....
The jelly webought tasted bad. It was pointless thing to do at the outlet.
Afterbuy jelly, we visited Niketo choose a pair of soccershoes. Ihad an eye on expensive modelbut my friends say, ???Hey, stop dreaming???. I was disappointed that I can???t buy it. I will buy it next time.

POINTSTO REMEMBER:

-Capitalization

-Spelling

-WordComposition

-ProperNouns

-Pasttense of the verb

Hello, Louie! Here are few things you need to be mindful of.

Sentences should begin with capital letters. Always remember thatthe pronoun ???I??? should always be capitalized. Check your spelling on the word ???outlet???,???disappointed???, and ???expensive???.  Be mindfulof your past tense of the verb. Be reminded as well of the proper noun thatshould start in a capital letter like the word ???Nike???. It is a name of acertain brand of shoes so it should be capitalized. Recheck your wordcomposition. Always be reminded to make a complete sentence that means completeidea.