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ME AND MY FRIEND RAIN AND AMY

작성자 : seo***   ·   2017-06-21

Hi! My name is Lily Jeong. I am from Korea but I live in Taiwan.
I miss my Korean friends a lot. When I was in Korea we were almost the same.We lived
in a the same town, we had the same backpack, we went to the same school and we had the same in-line skates.We always stick together and we always play together.
But now I moved to different country and Amy moved as well only Rain stayed in the town.
We live separately now. We have different backpacks, we go to different schools, we
have different in-line skates. We can't stick together and we can't play
together. I miss them so much I wish I could play with them all year!
I LOVE YOU!

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           Hi!my name is Lily Jeong.I am from Korea but I live in Taiwan.
I miss my Korea friend a lot.When I was in Korea we was almost same.We lived
in a same town, we had same backpack,we go to same school and we had same in-line skates.We always stick together and we always play together.
But now I moved to different country and Amy moved, only Rain is in the town.
We are all separate.We have different backpack, we go to different school, we have different in-line skates.We can't stick together and we can't play
together.I miss them so much I wish I could play with them all year!
I LOVE YOU!



Hi! My name is Lily Jeong. I am from Korea but I live in Taiwan.
I miss my Korean friends a lot. When I was in Korea we were almost the same. We lived in the same town, we had the same backpack, we went to the same school and we had the same in-line skates. We always stick together and we always play together.


But now I moved to different country and Amy moved as well, only Rain stayed in the town.
We live separately now. We have different backpacks, we go to different schools, we have different in-line skates. We can't stick together and we can't play together. I miss them so much I wish I could play with them all year!
I LOVE YOU!

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