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Home work Novel 7
작성자 : har*** · 2017-06-18
Harry did notadmit what he saw!He's home was distroid!(It meen's hole sity was distroid!)
Instead of the palace a piece of rock and 58broken sored'sand79sored's,34broken speared and96speared and few other weapon's.
They wark in the senter of the magick work.There was a crystal ball!
But it has a problome...It was broke into a 5pieces!Oh no! poor Max!Roid cried.
What are we do?Harry said "It was ruind!!!"
-See you next at Home work Novle 7-
ps:sorry that I didn't do my best.
Instead of the palace a piece of rock and 58broken sored'sand79sored's,34broken speared and96speared and few other weapon's.
They wark in the senter of the magick work.There was a crystal ball!
But it has a problome...It was broke into a 5pieces!Oh no! poor Max!Roid cried.
What are we do?Harry said "It was ruind!!!"
-See you next at Home work Novle 7-
ps:sorry that I didn't do my best.
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Harry did not admit what he saw! He's home was
destroyed! (It mean's hole city was destroyed!)
Instead of the palace a piece of rock and 58 broken sored'sand7 9sored's, 34broken speared and96speared and few other weapon's. They work in the center of the magic world. There was a crystal ball! But it has a problem... It was broke into 5pieces! "Oh no! poor Max"! Roid cried. What should we do? Harry said "It was ruined!!!"
-See you next at Home work Novel 7-
PS: Sorry that I didn't do my best.
destroyed! (It mean's hole city was destroyed!)
Instead of the palace a piece of rock and 58 broken sored'sand7 9sored's, 34broken speared and96speared and few other weapon's. They work in the center of the magic world. There was a crystal ball! But it has a problem... It was broke into 5pieces! "Oh no! poor Max"! Roid cried. What should we do? Harry said "It was ruined!!!"
-See you next at Home work Novel 7-
PS: Sorry that I didn't do my best.