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H.W 6.13

작성자 : eli***   ·   2017-06-13

My grandmother likes sweet.
Because if we're order we are be grandma,and our body don't have sweets.
So my grandmother likes sweets very much.

답변

My grandmother likes sweet.
Because as we gets older like grandma our body won't have sweets anymore.
So, my grandmother likes sweets very much.


2nd sentence:
Because, as we gets older like grandma our body won't have sweets anymore.
correction: As we get older like a grandma our body won't have sugar anymore.


#1 There is a circumstance in which we can start a sentence with ?because? and not be violating any silly rules. If we start a clause with ?because?, then insert a comma, and then a second clause, then both of the clauses are in the same sentence and everyone is safe.


#2 As we get - subject verb agreement (Plural subject + no s verb)


#3 Let's use the appropriate words for making our sentences. example: sugar - sweet

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