Hello everyone! Nice to meet you. My name is Chae Won Park. I am a third grader at Boram Elementary School. I live in Sejong City, South Korea.

and near the city, there is Suckjangli museum.
Correction: In our city, there is a museum called Suckjangli museum.

The museum hold a "guseokki festival" in May every year.
Correction: It annually conducts a festival called "Guseokki" in the month of May.

One day, my family went to the " Gusuckkki Festival " in the museum, because I have much interested in the Paleolithic Age.
Correction: One day, my family and I went to Guseokki festival because I'm very interested in Paleolithic Age.

Everyone wore prehistoric clothes during the festival.
Correction: Everyone was wearing prehistoric clothes during the festival.

My family also wore a prehistoric dress.
Correction: We also wore a prehistoric dress.

And I had a chance to make a stone axe.
The stones were cut off and hung onto a twig, which became a fine stone axe.

Wearing Paleolithic dress and carrying a stone axe, I felt like I was a Paleolithic girl.
Correction: While wearing a Paleolithic dress and carrying a stone axe, I felt like I was a Paleolithic girl.

Our family went to a prehistoric house and took pictures.
Then, we became very hungry. We went to a cafeteria.
Correction: Then, we got hungry and went to a cafeteria.

We bought corn, sausages, rice cakes, and chicken skewer.
And our sat around in the oven roasting food.
Correction: We bought corn, sausages, rice cakes, and chicken skewer. We sat around the barbecue grille and ate them deliciously.

Mom, Dad, and my younger brother looked so happy.
or
(Correction: My mom, dad, and younger brother looked so happy.)

The Paleolithic Age seemed just similar to our times.
Correction: The Paleolithic age seems similar to our time.

How did it feel? It looks funny, doesn't it?
Correction: How was it? It looks fun, doesn't it?

Why don't you experience the Paleolithic Age like I did?
Correction: Why don't you try to experience Paleolithic Age like I did?
or
Correction: Why don't you try to experience going to a Paleolithic Age-inspired events?

Join the "Paleolithic Festival " with your family next year.

You'll feel like you're going back seven hundred thousand years in a time machine.
Correction: It would make you feel like you travel back in time.

Thank you for listening to my story so far.
Correction: Thank you for listening to my story.