People all around the world celebrate holidays.They also celebrate it different
ways.Many Chinse People celebrate Chinse New Year.They wish for good luck,they
also put on a colorful and gold Lion Costume and dance.When some people dance,
the other people watch and they wish for good luck.Many people celebrate
Christmas on December 25.Christmas is only one day but we celebrate more longer.
Many people decorate there tree and decorate the house with colorful lights.
Peoples sing songs and give gifts to family and friend.We also eat manythings
People all around the world celebrate the New Year.People use many ways to
show a New Year but,in Korea we celebrate with fireworks.Holidays are special
time for people many holiday are same many holiday are different
but!I think holidays are fun!

BETTER TO WRITE IT THIS WAY:

People all around the world celebrate different holidays. They also celebrate it in different ways.

Many Chinese celebrate Chinese New Year. They wish for good luck, they
also put on colorful and gold lion costume and dance. Some people dance while others watch and they wish for good luck.

Many people celebrate Christmas on December 25.Christmas is only one day but we celebrate it longer. Many people decorate their trees and their house with colorful lights.People sing songs and give gifts to family and friends. We also eat different food.

People all around the world celebrate New Year. People do many things to celebrate New Year but in Korea we celebrate it with fireworks.

Holidays are special time for people. There are many holidays, some are the same while others are different but I think holidays are fun!

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