Penguins are most amazing animals and my favorite is Emperor Penguins
Emperor Penguins are the bigest of all the other penguins. Emperor Penguins
are tall like almost same with me![but I am little bit taller] penguins
like to eat fish.Penguins are birds but,they do not fly, instead of flying
with there wings,they use there wings to swim. They are such a good swimmer
they look like they are flying under the water!Emperor Penguins have black and
white feathers .The feathers keep them warm,in the water feather keeps them
dry.Emporor Penguins mostly live around the coast of Antarctica.It is the
coldest palce in the world!Sometimes it can get as cold as 50 degrees below
zero!they huddle together to keep them warm.
Anyway, penguins are cute!

BETTER TO WRITE IT THIS WAY:

Penguins are the most amazing animals and my favorite is Emperor Penguins.
Emperor Penguins are the biggest of all the other penguins. Emperor Penguins are as tall as me (but I am little bit taller).

Penguins like to eat fish. Penguins are birds but they do not fly, instead of flying with their wings, they use their wings to swim. They are such a good swimmer, they look like they are flying under the water!

Emperor Penguins have black and white feathers. The feathers keep them warm in the water and the feathers keep them dry. Emperor Penguins mostly live around the coast of Antarctica. It is the coldest place in the world! Sometimes it can get as cold as 50 degrees below zero! They huddle together to keep them warm. Anyway, penguins are cute!

POINTS TO REMEMBER:
- Observe the proper use of punctuation marks

- Observe correct capitalization of words

- Know the difference of "there", "their" and "they're"

- Review subject-verb agreement