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작성자 : typ***   ·   2017-06-12

Summer is around the corner. I look forward to traveling to Bangkok during my summer vacation. Koreans mainly spend their vacation in summer so airline ticket price tend to be more expensive than usual. Actually, I didn’t want to go there. I suddenly decided to go there while just surfing the airline application. Due to the promotion of some airline, I could get the ticket. I also bought another ticket. That was not impulsive purchase. I just wanted to take my kid to Hongkong and show some famous amusement park before entering elementary school. I have been there once with my wife so I wanted to take my kid there someday. Before my class is started, I write my thinking shortly.

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Summer is around the corner. I lookforward to travel to Bangkok during my summer vacation.Koreans mainly spend their vacation in summer so airline ticket price tend tobe more expensive than usual. Actually, I didn't want to go there. I suddenlydecided to go there while just surfing the airline application. Due to thepromotion of some airline, I could get the ticket. I also bought anotherticket. That was not an impulsivepurchase. I just wanted to take my kid to Hong Kong and showsome famous amusement parks before enteringelementary school. I have been there once with my wife so I wanted to take mykid there someday. Before my class started, I wrote about mythoughts shortly.

 

Hi Kim! You are such a wonderful fatherto your kid. I hope everyone will enjoy the vacation.

 

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