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Home work novle 5

작성자 : har***   ·   2017-06-11

But they kill the dragon and sneak into the dragon word's castle!
The dragon's had there sword and gun's!
And they like meal.Max shiverd.
They come here becouse there's a live baby dragon made a cristal!
Harry need that dragon.They went to rest,a small creacher passed by.
Fang barked.roid woke up,It was that cristal dragon!
They run to catch her.(dragon was a femail)
But the dragon was too fast.Harry pick up a wong and said a magic word.
Then poof,poof,poof!There's three tiger appeard!!!
They chaced the dragon.
But there hand tuched dragon's budy they all turnd into a rock.


-See you Next time in Home work novle 6-

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But they kill the dragon and sneak into the dragon word's castle!The dragon had there sword and gun!
And they like meal. Max
shivered.
They come here because there's alive baby dragon made a crystal!
Harry needs that dragon. They went to rest, a small creature passed by. Fang barked. Roid woke up, It was that crystal dragon! They run to catch her. (dragon was a female)
But the dragon was too fast. Harry picks up a wond and said a magic word. Then poof!! poof!! poof! There's three tiger appeared!!! They chased the dragon but, there hand touched the dragon's body they all turned into a rock.


-See you Next time in Home work novel 6-
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