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The tired day!

작성자 : syw***   ·   2017-06-08

Today, I went to the swimming class in the school. It was very tired because yesturday, I did swimming for 4 hours! Even tomorrow, I have to do swimming for 4 hours! Yesterday, my friend Isabella did a had a fever because the swimming pool`s water is very cold. I will tell the teacher that swimming for 4 hours are very tired! Oh my, god!!!

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The Tiring Day


Today, I went to the swimming class at school.I was very tired because yesterday, I swam for 4 hours! Even tomorrow, I have to doswimming again for 4 hours! Yesterday, my friend Isabella had a fever because the swimming pool`s water was very cold. I will tell my teacher that swimming for 4 hours is very tiring! Oh my, God!


 


Hi Alice, Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.I really appreciate it. If you're a mermaid, swimming for 4 hours is just apiece of cake, but you're just a princess. I know it's really tiring! I hopeyour friend will get well soon. I'm excited to see you again in the class. Havea happy weekend! :)


 


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