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작성자 : das***   ·   2017-06-08

My pet’s name is Sanny, and she is 4 years old.
Sanny has big eyes and long tail, and lots of white fur.
She is small and has small ears and short legs.
Sanny likes and eats well many kinds of fish and meat.
Most of all, she likes mackerel and hairtail.
Sanny have great senses of hearing, so she realize right away when I come home.
She keeps her balance well even in an uneven space and run fast.
One day, because of I felt bad, I sat on sofa still, Sanny came to me and came up on my knees like she know my mood. We spent our time without saying anything for hours. The memory of the day is most impressive to me.

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My pet's name is Sanny, and she is 4 years old.
Sanny has big eyes and a long tail, and lots of white fur.
She is small and has small ears and short legs.
Sanny likes and eats well many kinds of fish and meat.
Most of all, she likes mackerel and hairtail.
Sanny has great sense of hearing, so she knows right away when I come home.
She keeps her balance well even in an uneven space and when she runs fast.
One day, because of I felt bad, I sat on sofa still, Sanny came to me and came up on my knees like she knows my mood. We spent our time without saying anything for hours. The memory of that day is very impressive for me.


 


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