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Home work novle 4
작성자 : har*** · 2017-06-03
They got there horse and go to the music word.
The music word had a nice looking garden and there is a musician around it.
Wow,It is very beautiful!Roid said.
Oh,yes!It is beautifull!Harry said.
Fang bark happily.
King welcome them.
The king give the food and water.
The king's son named Max like to go with them.
Umm...Max can go with together!They said.
So Max's father give Max the 25warrior!
They got out the music word and go to the dragon land.
They got there but the dragon's were attacking the 25warrior and Fang,Roid,Harry,Max!
The 10warrior's death!And only15warrior and Fang,Roid,Harry,Max were live!
What will happen now?
-See you next time at Home work novle 5- /^-^/
The music word had a nice looking garden and there is a musician around it.
Wow,It is very beautiful!Roid said.
Oh,yes!It is beautifull!Harry said.
Fang bark happily.
King welcome them.
The king give the food and water.
The king's son named Max like to go with them.
Umm...Max can go with together!They said.
So Max's father give Max the 25warrior!
They got out the music word and go to the dragon land.
They got there but the dragon's were attacking the 25warrior and Fang,Roid,Harry,Max!
The 10warrior's death!And only15warrior and Fang,Roid,Harry,Max were live!
What will happen now?
-See you next time at Home work novle 5- /^-^/
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Home work Novel 4
They got their horses and go to the music word.
The music word has a nice looking garden and there is a musician around it.
"Wow, It is very beautiful!" Roid said.
"Oh, yes! It is beautiful!" Harry said.
Fang bark happily. King welcome them. The king give the food and
water. The king's son named Max like to go with them.
"Umm...Max can go with us together" ! They said.
So Max's father give Max the 25 warriors. They got out to the music word and go to the dragon land.
They got there but the dragon's were attacking the twenty five (25) warriors and Roid's friends. Ten (10) warriors were dead! And only fifteen (15) warriors and
Roid were alive!
What will happen now?