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작성자 : dwc***   ·   2017-06-04

Hi!Teacher!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You give me a collection!So I type this sentence!
(1)be red inthe face......You be red in the face!
(2)wal off......We walk off the park.
(3)take someting off......Do like take picture off nature

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Hi!Teacher!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You give me a collection!So I type this sentence!
(1)be red inthe face......You be red in the face!
(2)wal off......We walk off the park.
(3)take someting off......Do like take picture off nature


Better

You give me a selection so I type this sentence.
1. Be red in the face - You look very red in the face.
2. walk off - We walk off from the park.
3. take something off - Do you like to take picture of nature?
ex. She took off her cardigan.


Points to remember

WORD CHOICE/ COMPOSITION
Remember that proper use of words and composition is very important so that the listener could understand your ideas in a clear and accurate way.

Examples
collection - selection
You be red in the face. - You look very red in the face.
Do like take picture off nature. - Do you like to take pictures of nature?


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Hello Hana!

I want you understand the thing you write. Not only by writing what you need to write, but also to understand what you had written. Take note of the right spelling of the words and the proper spacing. Also how to use punctuation marks.

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