We talked about my boss today. I don't like him. I have my reasons why I hate him. First, he is lack of courtesy. Here is something that happened to me once. I had a lot of work to do. I feel really tired and exhausted at the time. He came to my store and he point out why I didn't you say hello to him in front of costumer. It was so humiliating and depressing. I didn't want to go there, but I promise to finish my job at least three months.

Take of these:

>word choice
>capitalization
>proper margin

Great job, Rachel! Your improvement is noticable.  Keep it up! Fighting~! See you tomorrow~!