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작성자 : rac*** · 2017-05-31
I take Korean style pancake for late-night meal. It called "Buchimgae(부침개)".
It is really simple how to make Buchimgae. Combine the flour with egg and water mix. Then I can add whatever I want. It's done!!!
Anyway, We talked about parents worried. In korea, Many of parents are involved their children. For instead, child's friends, grades, study, even thinking. It's really a bit suffocating.
It is really simple how to make Buchimgae. Combine the flour with egg and water mix. Then I can add whatever I want. It's done!!!
Anyway, We talked about parents worried. In korea, Many of parents are involved their children. For instead, child's friends, grades, study, even thinking. It's really a bit suffocating.
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I ate Korean style pancake for late-night meal. It's called "Buchimgae(º??§°³)". It is really easy to make Buchimgae. First, combine flour, egg and water then mix. And you can add whatever you want. It's done!!!
Anyway, We talked about parents' concerns in Korea, Most of the parents are worried about their children. For instance: child's friends, grades, studies, even thinking. It's really a bit suffocating.
Be mindful:
>simple past tense
>word choices
Keep in mind those correction Rachel! Keep it up! High Five! 