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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-06-01
We can do chores and leave money in the bank.
If we leave money in the bank, a years later money will be more than first.
If we do chores mom or other will give money.
If we leave money in the bank, a years later money will be more than first.
If we do chores mom or other will give money.
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We can do chores and put our money in the bank. If we save our money in the bank, after a year or more, your money will be bigger. If we do chores our parents could pay us.
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