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작성자 : hnu*** · 2017-05-31
-short ghost story
It was a rainy day. one man and one woman crossed the pedestrian crossing. But that woman was ran over by a car! The man was really surprised, and he thought this 'woman was dead!'But strange...The woman stood up! and walk! But how? blood is bleeding from her body, and bruises everywhere! then the man saw the car number,but the car ran away. and he forget that car number. and she run over by a car again and again. and then, that man ran away.(because he scared) But someday he noticed that woman is a hit-and-run woman.(she just wanted to catch that criminal, so she show him.)
It was a rainy day. one man and one woman crossed the pedestrian crossing. But that woman was ran over by a car! The man was really surprised, and he thought this 'woman was dead!'But strange...The woman stood up! and walk! But how? blood is bleeding from her body, and bruises everywhere! then the man saw the car number,but the car ran away. and he forget that car number. and she run over by a car again and again. and then, that man ran away.(because he scared) But someday he noticed that woman is a hit-and-run woman.(she just wanted to catch that criminal, so she show him.)
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It was a rainy day. One man and one woman were walking on the pedestrian crossing. But, that woman was ran over by a car! The man was really surprised, and he thought that the woman was dead! But a strange things happened...The woman stood up! and walked! But how? the blood was flowing through her body, and bruises were everywhere! then The man saw the car number, but the car ran away. so he forgot the car number. and
The woman was ran over by the car again and again. and then, that man ran away. (because he got scared) But In some days, he would notice that the woman got hit-and-run. (she just wanted to catch that criminal, so she was showing him.)