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작성자 : rac***   ·   2017-05-29

We finished unit3 "When you have a cold." last week. So we start the new subject
"What are you worried about?" I'm important to me the present than a future.
Anyone can't live my life. Anybody don't know what to do with future. For example, When I cross the street at a crosswalk, I might get hit the car. It is a misery!!! Therefore, I persuade my motto " Enjoy the present!!"

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We finished Unit 3 "When you have a cold." last week. So we started the new lesson "What are you worried about?" For me, present is more important than the future.
Nobody know's how long my life is. Nobody knows what will happen in the future.  For an When I cross the street at the crosswalk, I might get hit by a car. It is a misery! Therefore, I will persue my motto "Enjoy the present!"


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Hi, Rachel  Happy Monday to you. Thank you for doing your homework. Keep it up. You just has to keep on using those correction anytime. Remember it will helps you a lot once you're familiar with these things. I'll see you tomorrow. Have a great night to you!

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