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At the shopping mall

작성자 : dwc***   ·   2017-05-28

People sell good clothes.
And
we csn buying pretty clothes.
We wear some clothes,
and we don't want
buy clothes.
So we can don't buy clothes.
The last!
So we can buy clothes freely,
and we can don't buy clothes freely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

답변

           People sell good clothes.
And
we csn buying pretty clothes.
We wear some clothes,
and we don't want
buy clothes.
So we can don't buy clothes.
The last!
So we can buy clothes freely,
and we can don't buy clothes freely!!!!!!!!!!!!!




Better

People sell good clothes and we can buy pretty clothes. We wear some clothe but we don't want to buy. And we are free to buy or not to buy clothes.


Points to remember:
WORD CHOICE/ COMPOSITION
Remember that proper use of words and composition is very important so that the listener could understand your ideas in a clear and accurate way.

Example
we can buying pretty clothes. - We can buy pretty clothes.
So we can buy clothes freely, and we can don't buy clothes. - And we are free to buy or not to buy clothes.


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Hello Hana!

In creating a sentence or in talking to someone you need to choose the right words in describing your ideas. Also you need to compose a sentence that is clear and accurate. One more thing you need to omit some word that is not included or those words you used in other sentence. Try to find synonyms of that word and you can use it.





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