I willintroduce my classroom teacher Kim Hye Jung. When I was on fifth grade, I was scared because she is going tobe my sixthgrade teacher. Iheard rumorsabout her. They said that she was really strict. But whenI met her, I found out that the rumor was totally wrong. My teacher is very nice! She tells usmemory of funny tales and she can make math class fun! And we can crack a joke to her because my teacher is kind andshe likes me. I'mcertain that I can make a great memory at sixth grade.

Last weekend, Iwent to lotto outletwith my friends. This was the first time I wentthere with my friends. We rode on a bus to go to the outlet. When we arrived, wegot madon thebus driver because he was really unkind.

First,we wentto thejelly shop. I didn't know reason why my friends wanted togo there; sadly I spent all money to buy jelly. Next, we wentto Adidasand Nike. I saw anice sportswear but I couldn't buy it because it was really expensive. I hope I can buyit once.

POINTS TOREMEMBER:

-Past Tenseof the Verb

-Capitalization

-Proper Sequencing

-Proper Noun

-Spelling

Hello, Louie! I appreciate the compositionsyou did. Here are the things you need to review. First, always be mindful ofthe past tense of the verb.When the action is already been done, it should be written or said in its pastform: can-could, is-was, are-were, find-found,go-went, spend-spent, ride-rode, hear-heard, arrive-arrived, and don't-didn't.

Second, be mindful of your capitalization. Always rememberto start the sentence with a capital letter.

Third, follow the proper sequencing. Sequencing is when you arrange the eventsin order from first to last. You use first (then the event), second (then theevent), third (then the event), and so on. You can also use the words next,last or lastly, and finally.

Fourth, review your proper noun. You havelearned this when we were still discussing your grammar book. Proper noun is a noun that names a particular person, place, or thing and begins with a capital letter. Inyour composition, the Adidas and Nike are proper nouns as they are names of aparticular thing, so it should start in a capital letter.

Lastly,check your spelling. You misspelled the words outlet and arrived.

>>>>Keep on improving,Louie!<<<<Teacher Abby>>>>