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작성자 : rac***   ·   2017-05-25

We talked about night owl and early bird almost the end of the class.
I'm a kind of early bird. I usually wake up at 7 to 8'o clock. I sleep at 10:30 to 11 PM. But I was a kind of night owl when I was a high school student.
I went to academy after our class. Students, espeacially high school students have a hectic schedule in Koreaa. It is a poor.

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We talked about night owl and an early bird when it almost end of the class.
I'm a kind of an early bird. I usually wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock in the morning. I usually go to bed at 10:30 or 11 o'clock in the evening. But I was a kind of night owl when I was a high school student.
usually go to Academy after our class. Students,espeacilly  being a high school student you have a hectic schedule in Korea.


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Great job for tonight, Rachel.  Keep it up! I'll see you tomorrow (FRIDAY-FRIYEY)  

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