I didn't know that the Koreabank is special becausewhen I was just one year old, my mom offered my small ring to the bank. But when I looked on the
writings at the computer, I was surprised ofthe poster. It said, "Coinless Bank
of Korea." I was shockedthat we can no longer use coins.It is not right because
it's not fair to change the usual thing. For example, we have a lot of coins, but why is it that we are going to use credit cards and not thereal coins? It'snot fair, we shouldnot change the future because we don't knowwhat will happen in thefuture.

Hello Jared! Thank you sharing your thoughtsand ideas about this topic.

POINTS TO REMEMBER

-Proper Capitalization

-Proper usage of preposition, conjunction andarticle

-Proper tenses of verbs

-Word choice/ composition

- Proper Punctuations

Excellent job Jared! Kindly review yourcorrections and be mindful in choosing words that you use in constructing yoursentences. Study well handsome!