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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-05-23
My favorite chocolate is kinder.
It's price is 2000 won.
But I think it is so expensive.
Because it is small and only five.
It's tasty like honey, so I think we eat kinder so much, we're get too fat.
It's price is 2000 won.
But I think it is so expensive.
Because it is small and only five.
It's tasty like honey, so I think we eat kinder so much, we're get too fat.
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My favorite chocolate is Kinder Joy.
It's price is 2000 won. / It cost 2000 won. ✓
But I think it is so expensive./ I think it is so expensive. ✓
Because it is small and only five (?).
It's tasty like honey, so I think if we eat Kinder Joy so much, we will be too fat.
REMINDERS:
1. Let's be careful in writing the specific name of a brand name.
example: Kinder Joy
2. Let's learn the if-conditionals in our class.
Hi, Ellie!
Thank you for doing your homework. Let's have further discussion about this grammar rule later. See you!
-Teacher Joanna