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작성자 : rac***   ·   2017-05-22

We talked about "When I have a cold" on today. I didn't caught a cold well.
But In the summer, It is hot and I persfire as much. And then, I should take a asprin before i deep sleep. If I seriously caught a cold, I must go on hospital.
I trying to make my house more comfortable place. Because It could be a feel better.

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We talked about "When I have a cold?" today. I didn't catch a cold.
But in summer, It's hot and I perspire a lot. Then, I should take an asprin before I sleep deeply. If I seriously catch cold, I must go to hospital.
I'm trying to make my house more comfortable place. Because it makes me feel better.



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Thank you for doing your homework. Your improvement is seeable. You are doing an amazing job, Rachel.  I'll see you tomorrow and Have a great night to you!

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