I think like that. Everyday, I go to school, rest little time, go to other class, eat meal, do homework, go to bed.....
Special thing is almost occur weekend. So I didn't have any special things. but I'll be wrote my diary NO.1.
I went to school at 8:30. And school was done at 4:45, so I went my home and rest little time. I did English class with teacher Marshiel. I finished class, I write this writing. Now, I'm so tired. And I'll be do homework, going to another class....huuuuu, I think homework isn't have end...
this is my NO.1 diary. thank you for watching this writing

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I think like that. Everyday, I go to school, rest a little time, go to another class, eat a meal, do homework, and go to bed. Special things occur on weekends. But I don't have any special plan. So I will write my diary NO.1. I went to school at 8:30. I finished the school at 4:45, so I went home and rest a little time. I did the English class with teacher Marshiel. After the class, I write this diary. Now, I'm so tired, but I still need to do my homework and I'm going to go to another class.... huuuuu, I think homework doesn't have an end... This is my NO.1 diary. Thank you for reading.

Points to remember:

1. WORD CHOICE/ COMPOSITION
Remember that proper use of words and composition is very important so that the listener could understand your ideas in a clear and accurate way.

Examples:

Special thing is almost occur weekend - Special things occur on weekends.

Now, I'm so tired. And I'll be do homework - Now, I'm so tired, but I still need to do my homework

thank you for watching this writing - Thank you for reading.

So I didn't have any special things -  But I don't have any special plan.

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Hello Jack!

You told me that you want to become a writer. So in writing or in speaking you need to choose the right word to describe your ideas. For them to easily understand the things that you want to say. But then its a good thing that you shared your diary to me. So that I can guide you and teach you what are the things you need to improve.

T.Marshiel^^