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작성자 : bos***   ·   2017-05-21

I want to sell book, pen, card.... lot of thing.
There is many book in my room, there is a book that I'm not reading,
so I want to sell that.
And pen, I have lot of ball point pan,.
because of that I want to sell that.
card I have lot of playing card, so I want to sell it.

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I want to sell books, pens, cards and lots of things. There are many books in my room. There is a book that I'm not reading, that's why I want to sell it. I also have lots of ballpoint pens. I have lots of playing cards too. So, I want to sell those.


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Oh Jack~ you have many things that you could sell. Tell me more about it tomorrow :) Have a good sleep.


 

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