I have a lot of plans on Saturday. First of all, I want to have a new hair cut. 
One of my friends worn a bobbed hair. She told me "You should have a bob hair cut." and I answered "I wonder if I could do something like that."
She said "I think it would be look better." I was wondering if I could have a bob hair cut so often.

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Hi, Rachel  Happy Monday to you! You're learning fast. Keep it up! Remember that it's not how good you are, it's how good you want to be. If you are determined to learn no one can stop you. Way to go, Rachel~!