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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-05-18
It's good idea to have a garage sale.
because if we have a garage sale,
we can get the thing that we want cheaper then store.
And we can sell the thing that we don't want to use it.
so we didn't have to trash it.
And it was fun to have a garage sale.
because if we have a garage sale,
we can get the thing that we want cheaper then store.
And we can sell the thing that we don't want to use it.
so we didn't have to trash it.
And it was fun to have a garage sale.
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It's a good idea to have a garage sale, because if we have it we can get the things the we want for cheaper price compared to the store. We can also sell the things that we don't want to use. So, we don't have to throw it away.
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