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My dream job

작성자 : mom***   ·   2017-05-16

My dream job is high seat policeman when I grow up I want take drive many sportscar but I want policeman too.
And I don't want to run to hold criminal I want seat on the chair and make a order. And I want many money.
So my dream job is highseat policeman.

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           -johnson-
My dream job is to be a high ranking police officer when I grow up. I want take to drive many sports car but I want to be a policeman too.
And I don't want to run after and catch criminals. I want a seat on the chair and give orders. And I want to have lots of money.

Note: The quantifier 'many' is not used for the word money. We can use 'a few' 'much' 'a lot of'.

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