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Home work Diary 2017-5-13

작성자 : har***   ·   2017-05-14

My father and I go to fishing.
We got there and fishing. At first, I catch small fish.
But I was very happy.
And then my father catch a large fish.
I want eat it but I didn't.
And the time passed,I feel the strong bite!
I haul the fish!
It was very big, I was surprised.
We catch the maby 15fish.
It was great!

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My father and I went fishing. At first, I caught a small fish and I was very happy. Then my father caught a big fish. I want to eat it but I didn't. When the time passed by, I felt a strong bite! I hauled the fish! It was a very big fish and I was surprised. We caught 15 fish. It was great!
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