My favorite role model is "Jin Bora".Why I choose favorite role model "Jin-Bora" is:
(1)She is a Beautiful!
(2)She can play Beautiful Piano song~~!^^
(3)She is a Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~^^

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My favorite role model is Jin Bora. Why I choose Jin Bora as my role model its because;
1. She is beautiful.
2. She can play beautiful piano songs.
3. She is wonderful.

Points to remember:

Capitalization of words - Use capitals for the first word of a document and the first word after a period and proper nouns. In other words, capitalize the names of people, specific places, and things.

Example:

Beautiful - beautiful

Piano - piano

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Hello Hana!

Good job! But then I want you to read first the instruction and understand it before you make your assignment. Try to make diary that its like you telling a story.