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작성자 : rac***   ·   2017-05-11

We talked about my routine. I changed my routine of day these day.
I worked a part-time job on weekend at the beginning. but My manager wanted to work on weekday. First of all, I wake up at 7 o'clock in the morning. After eating breakfast, I blush my teeth. And then I work a store until 5 o'clock.
I feel hectic schedual after I write my routine.

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We talked about my daily routine. I changed my daily routine one of these day.
I have a part-time job on the weekend but then my manager wanted/asked me to work on the weekdays. First of all, I wake up at 7 o'clock in the morning. After eating breakfast, I brush my teeth. And then I work at the store until 5 o'clock.
I felt tired of my hectic schedule.


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Well, Thank you doing your homework ven though you have a hectic schedule  you still have this one. I really appreciate the things you did while we're having a class a while ago. You are magnificent! Have a great night to you see I'll see again tomorrow :))

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