We talked about my day. Today is very important day because of election day.
I voted a candidate who suppose to me. You asked me "Why did you choose him?"

Our former President Park is in prison. She didn't doher obligation and she used her position to pressure on South Korean corporations to raise tens of millions of dollars for foundation.

Be mindful about:

>capitalization
>word choices

Keep on doing great Rachel. Thank you for doing your homework. That is awesome!