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작성자 : hnu*** · 2017-05-08
name:cheese and cheese
price:3200won
descriptions:we can eat the flaver little, and we can choose it, than the machine work.machine pick the cheese flaver, and we can mix the cheese too! than the chesse flow out to the hole. but becareful the cheese is hot.
price:3200won
descriptions:we can eat the flaver little, and we can choose it, than the machine work.machine pick the cheese flaver, and we can mix the cheese too! than the chesse flow out to the hole. but becareful the cheese is hot.
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name: cheese and cheese
price: 3200won
descriptions: We can eat a little of the flavor, and we can choose it, then the machine work. The machine choose the cheese flavor, and we can mix the cheese, too! then the cheese flows out from the hole. but be careful because the cheese is hot.