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camp

작성자 : kjy***   ·   2017-05-04

I went to camp and fished.
I ate barbeque too.
It was fun.

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Camp

I went to a camp. We fished there. I ate barbeque, too. It was fun.


POINTS TOREMEMBER:

**ARTICLES

**COMPLETESENTENCE/IDEA

Hello,Elena! Thank you for doing your homework. It was good. The only corrections areyour idea on the first sentences "I went to camp and fished." You have toseparate 'fished' in the idea because when you say you went to camp and fished,it seems that fished is a place. SO, it should be separated. Next is yourarticle 'a'. Place it before the word 'camp'. It emphasizes the word 'camp' inthe sentence.

Keep it up,Elena! :-*

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