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작성자 : vio***   ·   2017-05-07

If I were an animal that I wanted to be,I would be a Blue whale because it is the world's biggest animal. Also,brilliant blue whales mostly eat krill so it would be interesting me to eat mostly krill.

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If I were an animal that I wanted to be, I would be a blue whale because it is the world's biggest animal. Also, brilliant blue whales mostly eat krill so it would be interesting for me to eat them. mostly krill.

Hi, Jisue! Thank you for sending your thoughts. Kindly check the corrections. Be mindful of proper spacing. Also, there are better ways to express your ideas in sentences. Kindly study the use of pronouns. See you later!

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