oOnce upon a time,there has was a doctor named 'hHospital'. but he have had very old stethoscope. oOne day, a boy came to this old doctor. tThe boy was a fraind friend with of this doctor. a The boy wanted to buy a new stethoscope to for doctor him. but he didn`t have any money! and he have had a great idea.
nNext day, he went to the doctor again and got syringe had a shot.wWhen the doctor fine syringe is done, the boy stoled the docter`s stethoscope and took them it into his home and fixed it for the doctor. doctor`s

Final Draft:

Once upon a time, there was a doctor named, "Hospital" but he had a very old stethoscope. One day, a boy came to this old doctor. The boy was a friend of this doctor. The boy wanted to buy a new stethoscope for him but he didn't have any money and he had a great idea. Next, day he went to the doctor again and had a shot. When the doctor is done, the boy stole the doctor's stethoscope and took it to his home and fixed it for the doctor. 

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