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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-04-30
1. Mom relax the promise time.
2. My family like tidy.
3. My house ceiling is high.
4. I charge money to the bank.
2. My family like tidy.
3. My house ceiling is high.
4. I charge money to the bank.
답변
1. Mom relax the promise time. (I will ask you about this next meeting.)
2. My family likes our house to be tidy. (Let's use more connecting words to make our ideas complete.)
3. My house' ceiling is too high. (correct)
4. I save money to the bank. (Let's use the appropriate word for each idea we want to represent.)
2. My family likes our house to be tidy. (Let's use more connecting words to make our ideas complete.)
3. My house' ceiling is too high. (correct)
4. I save money to the bank. (Let's use the appropriate word for each idea we want to represent.)