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작성자 : cap*** · 2017-04-30
One day a Victor saw a woman. It was love at first sight. He tried to get her love him over and over again but she didn't liked Victor. She also had someone that she fall over heels in love. Victor was heart broken. All the Victor's friend tried to cheer him up. But that night Victor passed away of broken heart. Every night at the same day he comes and hunt down the man who the girl loved. The ghost always have tears on his face which never dry out. Yes, know do you understand? The ghost is the heart broken Victor. So this is my home work so see you later.^^
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One day Victor saw a woman. It was love at first sight.He tried to get her love over and over again but she didn't like Victor. She also had someone that she fell over heels in love. Victor was broken hearted.All Victor's friend tried to cheer him up. But, thatnight Victor passed away of a broken heart. Everynight at the same day he comes and hunts down the man whothe girl loved. The ghost always has tears on his facewhich never dry out. Yes, now do youunderstand? The ghost is the broken heartedVictor. So, this is my home work. See youlater.^^
Points to remember:
Proper Usage of Articles and Punctuations
Proper Verb Tenses
Word Order
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