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Missle attack on Sirea
작성자 : arr*** · 2017-05-01
At April, a U.S battleship launched 59 Tomahawk missiles to the Airbase on northern Sirea. It was planned by the former U.S president, Donald J. Trump. Many people was surprised bacause this was the first direct attack on Sirea.
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In April, a U.S. battleship launched 59 Tomahawk missiles to the Airbase in Northern Syria. It was planned by the newly elected U.S president, Donald J. Trump. Many people were surprised because this was the first direct attack in Syria.
Points to remember:
-spelling (Syria, because)
-proper capitalization of nouns (Northern Syria)
-Subject-verb agreement (the people were..)
-word choice
Thank you for sharing your thoughts Aaron! You are an awesome student! Keep it up!