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작성자 : jbl***   ·   2017-04-28

When I was bornd, it was very happy...
Becuse, if i didn't bornd, I can't feel happiness or sadness and something i can feel.

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When I was born, I was very happy. Because if I wasn't born, I wouldn't feel being happy or being sad and the other feelings.


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*spelling of the words

*word usage

*sentence structure


Hi! Jun. Thank you for sharing thoughts. It was short but very witty. Review the corrections.

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