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작성자 : sei*** · 2017-04-27
Why children should be taught to use computers at an early age.
1.children can get a lot of knowledge from computers.
2.they can develop their talents through computers.
3.they can meet many people through computers. (like I met you ~)
Why children shouldn't be taught to use computers at an early age.
1.children can get bad eyesight while watching computers.
2.they can become addiced to computer.
3.they might not be able to do what they have to do because of computers.
1.children can get a lot of knowledge from computers.
2.they can develop their talents through computers.
3.they can meet many people through computers. (like I met you ~)
Why children shouldn't be taught to use computers at an early age.
1.children can get bad eyesight while watching computers.
2.they can become addiced to computer.
3.they might not be able to do what they have to do because of computers.
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Why children should be taught to use computers at an early age.
1. Children can get a lot of knowledge from the computers.
2. They can develop their talents through computers.
3. They can meet many people using computers through internet. (like how I met you ~)
Why children shouldn't be taught to use computers at an early age.
1. Children can get develop bad eyesight at their young age while by using watching computers.
2. They can will become addicted to computer.
3. They might not be able to do what they have to do because of using computers all day.
Reminders:
1. Word Choice.
2. Capitalization in the beginning of the sentence.
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