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Happiness report

작성자 : arr***   ·   2017-04-26

Jayme Illen, the former UN advicer, proposed the 'Happyness day'. It takes place at March 20th. At that day, people of each nation was asked how much they are happy. accroding to the report, Norway was the happiest contry.

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           Jayme Illien, the former UN adviser, proposed the 'Happiness Day'. It takes place on March 20th. On that day, people of each nation were asked how much they are happy. According to the report, Norway was the happiest country.

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