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작성자 : hnu*** · 2017-04-24
food name: jelly salud
ingredients: many jellys,slice tomato,lots of veggies,apple,banana,bluebarry
recipe:mix the veggies,tomato,jellys,apple and made a salud sauce with apple, banana, bluebarries. and mix.
ingredients: many jellys,slice tomato,lots of veggies,apple,banana,bluebarry
recipe:mix the veggies,tomato,jellys,apple and made a salud sauce with apple, banana, bluebarries. and mix.
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food name: Jelly salad
ingredients: jellies, slices of tomatoes, lots of veggies, apples, bananas ,blueberries.
recipes: mix the veggies, tomatoes ,jellies, apples and make a salad sauce with apples, bananas, blueberries. and mix them all.