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we have to save earth.
작성자 : bos*** · 2017-04-25
Earth is the place that we live,
But we are pollution the earth.
so, if we want to live more in this earth,
we have to think if this thing I'm doing is pollution earth or not.
Earth is pollution by us, so we have to do something to earth.
solution one: we must not throw the trash anywhere.
because earth need a soil, but if we throw the trash, the soil will pollution.
Then we will ended too.
solution two: we must reduce the factory.
because factory make dust and bad air,
and this dust and bad air made air pollution.
so we have to reduce the factory.
Because of us and earth we have to do something
But we are pollution the earth.
so, if we want to live more in this earth,
we have to think if this thing I'm doing is pollution earth or not.
Earth is pollution by us, so we have to do something to earth.
solution one: we must not throw the trash anywhere.
because earth need a soil, but if we throw the trash, the soil will pollution.
Then we will ended too.
solution two: we must reduce the factory.
because factory make dust and bad air,
and this dust and bad air made air pollution.
so we have to reduce the factory.
Because of us and earth we have to do something
답변
Earth is the place that we live, but we pollute it. So, if we want to live more on this earth we have to think about the things that we do if it'll cause pollution or not. Earth is polluted because of us, we have to do something about it.
Solution one: We must not throw the trash anywhere. Earth needs soil, but if we'll just throw our trash there will be soil pollution. It'll be our end too.
Solution two: We must ban building more factories because they produce dust and bad air. Those are the cause of air pollution. So we need to stop building more factories.
Because of us and the earth we need to do something.
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