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homework(How can we save the energy)
작성자 : bos*** · 2017-04-20
I will going to save energy to turn off the light.
many people think light is not important.
But if we don't save the energy,
light will go out to, and we can't see when it was a night.
That will be not good.
So we must turn off the switch when we go outside.
We just have to touch the switch.
If we do this thing, we can save energy more.
many people think light is not important.
But if we don't save the energy,
light will go out to, and we can't see when it was a night.
That will be not good.
So we must turn off the switch when we go outside.
We just have to touch the switch.
If we do this thing, we can save energy more.
답변
I'm going to save energy by turning off the the lights. Many people think that light isn't important but if we don't save energy it'll get wasted and we can't use it anymore. It's not good. So, we must turn off the switch when we are outside. If we do this, we can save more energy.
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