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작성자 : eli***   ·   2017-04-18

I saw musical at Busan.
Clasdical is came out in the loudspeaker.
Musical theather has many people so I'm lost.

답변

I saw a musical play at Busan.
explanation: we have to include "play"  after the musical to make the sentence clearer

The
classical music are played  using the loudspeaker.
explanation: we have to add "the" before the word classical

The
musical theater was filled with many people so I got lost.
explanation: let's use the word 'filled with' to express that the place has so many people

 

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