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작성자 : hnu***   ·   2017-04-19

-Sorry my sister-

Today I teared your pretty dress. I am very sorry to you, and sorry to that didn't tell the truth.
And then I am very ashamed to you and I think I must tell the truth. this time
I wrote letter for you to apologize.I am very sorry about you and I promise I never ever did this again.

to sister

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          Today, I tore your pretty dress. I am very sorry to you, and sorry to that didn't tell the truth.
And then I am very ashamed to you and I think I must tell the truth this time
I wrote a letter for you to apologize. I am very sorry about what happened and I promise I will never ever do this again.

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